Chapter three the Battle 4 the calnthx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!

1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1
Wanna bet?StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.

So Flamepaw, is her sisters 'special' flamepaw. idk what i just typed.

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.

Darkrose , you mean her."Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.

Because cats obviously use text-talk"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11

O.o"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.

The mary-sue can kill . I did not guess that."Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"

I struggle to belive thisStarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.

Watthnkx and ples no more flams

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