The author dosent care much if she spelt THIS wrong
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly.
Is it the moonpool? Or some other , unspecified pool. Tell me starkit , i'm dyeing to know!
A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
Who Is This cat??????????? And why are her eyes magicly bright???
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
OHHHHH , I have absoloutly NO idea what this is about!Its obviously NOT about Starkit, Tigerstar and Hollyleaf. Not at all.
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest,"
You ruined my guessing game. I hate you strange tom.[ not really Whitestorm, you are sweggy]
He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar.
Why is Bluestar BlueStar? Is she actually a Blue Star?? Or a she-cat who looks like this:"she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell
JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
Oh , what are the powers? The power to be a Mary Sue , obviously.
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
Who is JayFeather?In this weird Fanfic, Jayfeather is NOT the Jayfeather we know and love. He is NOT grumpy. And he forgets about Briarlight and Half-Moon .
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